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THE
WRITE PLACE
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Writing
clear, straightforward, and grammatically correct English can be
challenging. English words can be used as verbs
or nouns, and sentences can be structured
in a variety of ways. This flexibility can sometimes result in communications
that are vague and confusing.
For non-native speakers of English, the use of articles
and prepositions can be particularly
difficult. And for all writers, whether they are in administrative
or technical positions, the large number of synonyms
and homonyms can be an obstacle to creating
communications that achieve a desired result. This site provides
examples of common grammatical errors and suggests possibilities
for their correction.
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| ACTIVE
VOICE |
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Voice
refers to the relationship between subject and verb. The subject
tells us what the sentence is about and the verb indicates the action
or state of being.
In
the active voice, the subject performs the action indicated
by the verb. Having the verb follow the subject is the preferred
construction for sentences because it adds energy to the writing
and establishes responsibility. In passive voice, the subject receives
the action identified by the verb. This may be an appropriate style
for some types of scientific or policy writing.
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Passive:
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A
decision was reached by the Board of Regents. |
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Active:
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The
Board of Regents reached a decision. |
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Passive:
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Computer
chips are made of silicon. |
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Active:
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Manufacturers make computer chips of silicon. |
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Passive:
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It was determined that the side effects of the drug were significant. |
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Active:
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We determined that the side effects of the drug were significant. |
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Passive:
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Songs from the 1960's were sung by the San Francisco musicians. |
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Active:
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The San Francisco musicians sang songs from the 1960's. |
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Passive:
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Over the past year, more than three million jobs have been eliminated. |
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Active:
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Over
the past year, management has eliminated more than three million jobs.
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| ADJECTIVES |
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An
adjective is a word that modifies a noun. It describes or
tells us something about the noun, like what kind or how many. Sometimes
an adjective is placed next to the noun it modifies, either directly
before the noun (an ancient
sword, the second notebook)
or directly after (an image distorted,
his dreams destroyed). Other
times an adjective is separated from the noun it modifies, as in
"the game was exciting.
In these cases, a linking verb (such as is, was, or
seemed) connects the noun and its modifier.
When
two or more adjectives (modifiers) appear before a noun, they should
follow a certain order. Here is the usual order of adjectives in
a series:
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1st:
Article or other noun signal word (a, an, the,
most)
2nd: Judgment (wonderful, unfair, useful, ugly)
3rd: Size (large, tiny, little)
4th: Shape (round, long, bell-shaped)
5th: Age (old, teenaged, modern)
6th: Color (green, yellow, black)
7th: Nationality (Vietnamese, Iranian, Russian)
8th: Material (stone, wood, cotton)
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Ex
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I just bought a yellow new Mini Cooper. |
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I
just bought a new yellow Mini Cooper. |
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Ex
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Is that your favorite cotton Mexican shirt? |
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Is
that your favorite Mexican cotton shirt? |
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Ex
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He
liked the rectangular large painting over the fireplace. |
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He
liked the large rectangular painting over the fireplace. |
| ARTICLES |
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Words
that often precede nouns are called articles and include a,
an, and the.
Indefinite
articles, a and an,
are used in front of nonspecific, singular nouns
beginning with consonant sounds
(a
movie, a
cat).
Use an
before nouns beginning with vowel sounds
(an
octopus, an
advertisement).
The
definite article the is used
in front of specific singular and plural nouns (the
movie, the
cats, the
furniture, the
future).
Many noncount
nouns (things that typically are not counted in English and not
made plural, like homework or happiness) require no article at all.
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Missing
article:
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There
was beautiful sunrise this morning. |
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There
was a beautiful sunrise this morning. |
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Missing
article:
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In
the vase was arrangement of orchids and lilies. |
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In
the vase was an arrangement of orchids and lilies. |
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No
article required:
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The
martial artists bowed to each other to show the respect. |
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The
martial artists bowed to each other to show respect. |
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Contextual
influence:
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Yesterday
I bought a jacket for $75, but
today the jacket was on sale for
$50. |
| CONTRACTIONS |
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Informal communications sometimes contain contractions,
where apostrophes are used to indicate omitted letters in certain
words (cannot:can't, is not:isn't, she is:she's). Some contractions
sound the same as several frequently used pronouns (you're:your,
they're:their). But pronouns never use apostrophes
to indicate possesion. For example, the possesive pronoun its
is often confused with it's,
the contraction for it
is.
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Ex
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She
didn't tell me that your going to wear that purple dress. |
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She
didn't tell me that you're going to wear that purple dress.
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Ex
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Their
going over to Jack's house to see if any of there DVD's were left
there. |
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They're
going over to Jack's house to see if any of their DVD's were left
there. |
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Ex
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The
new Honda was a much lighter color than it's owner had expected. |
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The
new Honda was a much lighter color than its owner had expected. |
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Homonyms (homophones) are words that sound alike but are
spelled differently and have different meanings. Since they are
not detected by spell checkers, they are one of the most common
causes of misspellings. Some common homonyms include:
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advice,
advise
affect,
effect
all ready, already
all
together, altogether
brake, break
choose,
chose
cite,
sight, site
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conscience, conscious
dominant,
dominate
elicit,
illicit
envelop,
envelope
forth,
fourth
loose,
lose
presence,
presents
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principal, principle
rein,
reign
right,
rite, write
stationary,
stationery
threw,
through, thorough
who's,
whose
your,
you're
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| MODIFIERS
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Modifiers
are words, phrases, or clauses that are used to give us more specific
information about something. When a modifier is misplaced, the statement
can be confusing. Modifiers should be placed as close as possible
to the words they modify.
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Ex
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Max
does not need the approval of anyone, unlike Joe. |
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Unlike
Joe, Max does not need the approval of anyone. |
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Ex
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Businesses
publish the URLs for their Web sites frequently in advertisements. |
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Businesses
frequently publish the URLs for their Web sites in advertisements. |
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Ex
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The
yucca plant only grows well in full sunlight. |
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The
yucca plant grows well only in full sunlight. |
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Most
people who responded to the ad quickly decided not to look at the
car. |
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Most
people who quickly responded to the ad decided not to look at the
car. |
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Most
people who responded to the ad decided quickly not to look at the
car. |
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Ex
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Several
customers decided after reading the newspaper, to boycott the store. |
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After
reading the newspaper, several customers decided to boycott the store. |
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Ex
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The
magician shuffled quickly the cards. |
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The
magician quickly shuffled the cards. |
| NOUNS:
PLURALS |
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Nouns
identify persons, places, or things. Making English nouns plural
can be confusing. Some nouns refer
to things that can be counted and made into plurals (a hundred dollars,
six miles, three children). Other
nouns refer to things that cannot easily be counted (excitement,
wisdom, traveling, electricity); these "noncount" nouns
usually have no plurals but can be quantified with expressions like
a lot of, much, some, many.
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Count:
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The
red box contained many photo of my family. |
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The
red box contained many photos of my family.
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Noncount:
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We
have ordered new equipments for the computer lab. |
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We
have ordered new equipment for the computer lab.
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Noncount:
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Brett
needed to do a homework before leaving in the morning. |
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Brett
needed to do homework before leaving in the morning.
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| PARALLELISM |
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Parallel
sentence structure exists when two or more sentence elements of
equal importance are similarly expressed. Parallel sentence elements
are often used for listing ideas or making comparisons. Both the
structure of the elements and the form of the words benefit a sentence's
clarity and symmetry.
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Ex
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We are interested in hearing your ideas on motivating employees, how
to introduce change, and quality control techniques. |
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We
are interested in hearing your ideas on motivating employees, introducing
change, and controlling quality.
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Ex
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Please
sign the proposal, date it, and it must be sent to me. |
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Please sign the proposal, date it, and
send it to me.
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Staff
openings will occur this year resulting from growth, experienced workers
transferring, and others who will retire. |
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Staff
openings will occur this year resulting from growth, transfers, and
retirements. |
| PREPOSITIONS
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Prepositions are used before nouns to give additional information
in a sentence. Many expressions in English contain prepositions
such as in, on,
of, for
or by. They define relationships
rather than refer to objects or meanings. They may show where something
is located or when something happened.
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Ex
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Joaquin
is acquainted to the president. |
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Joaquin
is acquainted with the president. |
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On
March, we will go to the mountains. |
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In
March, we will go to the mountains. |
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Tomorrow
Selina will travel to Irvine in the train. |
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Tomorrow
Selina will travel to Irvine on the train. |
| PRONOUN
REFERENCES |
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A pronoun can substitute for a noun. He,
she, and it
are personal pronouns. That,
which, who,
whose, whoever,
and whichever are relative
pronouns and introduce dependent clauses. Writers sometimes mistakenly
use a pronoun that could refer to more than one noun. Even if it
is implied, the reader may need to clearly indicate the person,
place, or thing being referenced.
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Ex
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Notetaking
is very helpful in doing research, especially if they are well organized.
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Notetaking
is very helpful in doing research, especially if notes are well organized.
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Neither
Lea nor Jana knew what she should do. |
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Neither
Lea nor Jana knew what Lea should do. |
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Neither
Lea nor Jana knew what their friend should do.
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Ex
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The
police car chased the black sedan around the corner and then it turned
on Academy Way. |
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The
police car chased the black sedan around the corner and then the sedan
turned on Academy Way. |
| RUN-ON
SENTENCES |
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Run-on
sentences result when two clauses that could stand on their own
are joined by a comma. There are four possible ways to correct this
depending on the intended meaning:
Use a period to create two complete sentences
Separate the clauses with a semi-colon
Add a comma and a coordinating conjunction between the clauses
(and, or, but, nor, or yet)
Add a comma and a subordinating conjunction or relative pronoun
to subordinate one of the clauses
Subordinating conjunctions:
while, although, because, if
Relative pronouns:
which, that, who
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Ex
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Speak
softly, someone is recording our conversation. |
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Speak
softly. Someone is recording our conversation.
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Speak
softly; someone is recording our conversation.
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Speak
softly, because someone is recording our conversation.
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Sergio
played well in the first game, at the second he performed poorly. |
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Sergio played well in the first game. At the second he performed poorly.
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Sergio played well in the first game; at the second he performed poorly.
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Sergio played well in the first game, but at the second he performed
poorly.
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Although
Sergio played well in the first game, at the second he performed poorly.
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Ex
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A flamingo once flew past our house I only got a brief glimpse of
it. |
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A flamingo once flew past our house. I only got a brief glimpse of
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A
flamingo once flew past our house; I only got a brief glimpse of it.
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A
flamingo once flew past our house, but I only got a brief glimpse
of it.
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I
only got a brief glimpse of a flamingo that once flew past our house. |
| SENTENCE
FRAGMENTS |
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All sentences
must have a subject and a verb. Sentence fragments are incomplete
because they are missing a subject or a verb, or both. Sometimes
phrases or clauses are incorrectly treated as a sentence. To avoid
fragments, beware of using these words to start sentences: because,
that, who, what, when, where, why, how, but, like, if, such.
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Ex
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Because
it was too difficult to hear the guitar player. |
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I
left the room because it was too difficult to hear the guitar player.
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The
engine, running at 350 rpms and catching on the clutch. |
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The engine is running at 350 rpms and catching on the clutch.
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The
engine, running at 350 rpms and catching on the clutch, eventually
sputtered and died.
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Ex
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After
a discussion, the group agreed. That root beer jelly beans were the
sweetest. |
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After
a discussion, the group agreed that root beer jelly beans were the
sweetest. |
| SYNONYMS |
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Synonyms
are words that mean essentially the same thing: dreary/gloomy, fury/rage,
and injure/damage. But because they each have unique connotations,
they cannot always be substituted for each other. For example, injure
is used in reference to humans and animals while damage would refer
to an object. We wouldn't say: "I injured my computer."
When in doubt, use a dictionary
for the precise definition of a word.
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Ex
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Angelina
observed the diffusion of cell phones in the classroom. |
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Angelina
observed the proliferation of cell phones in the classroom.
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Ex
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The
student conveyed his application just in time to meet the deadline. |
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The
student submitted his application just in time to meet the deadline.
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Ex
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Brad
made a list of fifteen intentions on New Year's Day. |
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Brad
made a list of fifteen resolutions on New Year's Day. |
| VERB
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A verb indicates the action or state of being. The tense of a verb
creates a time frame that should be consistent with the meaning of
the sentence. In English, the order that events occurred in time affects
the selection of the correct verb tense: what happened first, what
happened before that, what is happening now, and what will happen.
The present perfect and past perfect tenses are not usually used in
conversation, but they are appropriate for formal written discourse.
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Ex
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Yesterday,
I cash the refund check and buy a laptop. |
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Yesterday,
I cashed the refund check and bought a laptop. |
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The
Arteaga brothers wait here for two hours. |
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The
Arteaga brothers waited here for two hours. |
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The
Arteaga brothers have waited here for two hours. |
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Tomorrow
Peter the Anteater going to visit the Arts Plaza. |
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Tomorrow
Peter the Anteater is going to visit the Arts Plaza. |
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Tomorrow
Peter the Anteater will visit the Arts Plaza. |
| WORD
CHOICE |
Use
shorter words
for more impact: |
Eliminate
wordy
phrases: |
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utilize
effectuate
terminate
expedite
accentuate
alleviate
communicate
delineate
elucidate
initiate
intensify
augment
invalidate
investigate
prioritize
procrastinate |
use
do
end
rush
stress
ease
talk
draw
tell
start
boost
help
void
look into
sort
delay |
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a
percentage of
a large percentage of
ahead of schedule
as a matter of fact
at the present time
at this point in time
draw your attention to
due to the fact that
filled to capacity
in short supply
in spite of the fact that
in the event that
in the final analysis
the absence of
until such time as
will have to
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some
most
early
in fact
presently
now
show you
because
full
scarce
although, even though
if
finally, ultimately
no
until
must |
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Avoid
redundancy and restating concrete words abstractly:
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necessary
requisite
mutual cooperation
refer back to
take action
main essentials
past history
uniformly consistent
thunderstorm activity
hospital facility
time period
money resources
upright position
goals and objectives
choose or select |
requisite
cooperation
refer to
act
essentials
history
consistent
thunderstorm
hospital
time
money
upright
[use just one word]
[use just one word] |
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In
a very real sense, trickle-down economics exhibits a tendency to trickle
up, benefiting only the rich. |
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Trickle-down
economics tends to trickle up, benefiting only the rich. |
Contact:
Catherine Reynolds cdreynol@uci.edu
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